Friday, 10 April 2020

My Writing About Health


9 comments:

  1. Hi Malaih it's Autumn from Kumara School! I really enjoyed your piece of writing! The facts were very very interesting especially the tea and coffee facts. I don't think you could improve anything in this piece of writing it is FANTASTIC!Keep up the great work!
    Autumn

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    1. Hi Autumn, Thanks for the helpful, Respectful and Thoughtful comment. Hopefully I get to see some of your work sometime soon.

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    2. KIA ORA Maliah I am currently working on something and will be sharing quite sooon.
      Have a FANTASTIC DAY!
      Autumn

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    3. Kia Ora Autumn and I look forward to seeing your work
      Maliah

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  2. Hi Malaih it's Autumn from Kumara School! I really enjoyed your piece of writing! The facts were very very interesting especially the tea and coffee facts. I don't think you could improve anything in this piece of writing it is FANTASTIC!Keep up the great work!
    Autumn

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  3. Great work Maliah. I especially like the facts about coffee. I do love a good coffee.
    I am really pleased to see you blogging during the holidays. Hope to see more next week.
    Stay safe
    Mrs D

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    1. Thank you and I bet that the coffee part was your favourite aswell

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  4. good writing Mailah

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.