FAMILY TIME!
We all went to the beach, it had been like a year since we've been to the beach and it was baby Kane's first time going to the beach and to the park. He liked to watch the waves roll up on the stones, we didn't go to far cause of the beach breeze. We had a wee play at the play grounds and a picnic lunch together.
Kia Ora Maliah I am Alvin from YMS I really like your blog it looks like you like your baby brother a lot. Did you think about writing what you liked and which beach you went to. also you could write about which playground you wen to and what did you like most about it. but other from that Great Job Ka Pai!
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ReplyDeleteI am Alan from Yaldhurst Model school. I really liked your blog post because It was really detailed. I also liked how you wrote "He liked to watch the waves roll up on the stones"You can improve by adding a picture of the sea or adding some more information.
Kind Regards
Alan
Hi, I am Peter from Yaldhurst Model School. That was a good blog but there is some mistake can you fix it? How old is your baby and is the baby a boy or a girl? that was a good blog post. thank you if you can fix your blog. let me know.
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Hi Maliah , My Name is Olivia P I am a year 6 student at Yaldhurst Model School. Great work on your blog post it looks great.I like how you have added in a picture of you and baby kane. Who took the photo of you?.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could add in questions for people to ask so they can comment what the answer for them is.
Great Work!.
From Olivia P.
Hi, I am Peter from Yaldhurst Model School. That was a good blog but there is some mistake can you fix it? How old is your baby and is the baby a boy or a girl? that was a good blog post. thank you if you can fix your blog. let me know.
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Fun mailah
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Maliah,
ReplyDeleteI'm Grace from Yaldhurst Model School
I think this is a great blog post, you have your picture to support your what you did, and you explained this very well,
This reminded me when I was young I loved the beach and I always ate the sand ( not sure why)
Maybe next time if you got more pictures and
maybe put it into a slide,
But apart from that its very good,
Kind regards
- Grace
Hi I am Mykiala from yaldhurst model school.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good blog post.
I like how you told us what you did for family time.
New time you could maybe tell us why you did this.
Was it fun going to the beach?
Anyway great job.
MYKIALA YMS!!