Hello Mahila, I am Alan from Yaldhurst Model School or Yms for short. Great Blog post. The fudge looked really delicious and I really liked how you took the screenshot of the ingredients and the recipe. That was really clever.
Anyway if you want to improve it you can do it by writing one more paragraph in the top like for example you can write " Hello its me Maliah, and today I am going to talk about our fudge, how to make it and how it looked in the end." Kind Regards Alan
Well done Maliah. The fudge looks delicious. I like the way you have given us the recipe and the method so we can try and make your fudge. Great tip, to drop the fudge into cold water to ensure it is ready for the next stage.
Hello Mahila,
ReplyDeleteI am Alan from Yaldhurst Model School or Yms for short. Great Blog post. The fudge looked really delicious and I really liked how you took the screenshot of the ingredients and the recipe. That was really clever.
Anyway if you want to improve it you can do it by writing one more paragraph in the top like for example you can write " Hello its me Maliah, and today I am going to talk about our fudge, how to make it and how it looked in the end."
Kind Regards
Alan
Thank you for your comment I will use your advice for next time
DeleteStay safe
Maliah
Well done Maliah.
ReplyDeleteThe fudge looks delicious. I like the way you have given us the recipe and the method so we can try and make your fudge. Great tip, to drop the fudge into cold water to ensure it is ready for the next stage.